I enjoy the melodic take on this track. I honestly feel that if it was going to be a rap track you might need a higher BPM. At the rate now, I feel this is more of some type of chillout music.
at 0:20 there is a synth that comes in which makes it stray farther away from a rap track in my opinion. It gives off an electronic vibe that you don't hear in many serious rap tracks. Also, at 1:37 that same synth hits a note that is off key, and you can tell.
My next complaint is that during the break, at 0:45 i feel like you could change up the drums a bit so its not so repetitive. Just a small beat change can grab interest from anyone thats listening.
Other than those things. Still a solid track. And when you add lyrics it makes a huge difference. So I could see this becoming great.
I like the style your going for. It had me tapping my foot at a couple parts. For example from 3:20 on, I loved it. It felt like it would be in a club with other dance music.
I did feel that it got somewhat repetitve and dull through the begginning to middle, but it defiently picked up at the end.
I wanted to hear some more transitions when new instruments were added, even a small transition can make a song flow so much nicer.
Back to that 3:20 mark,
i feel that if you made a buildup, this would be an epic drop. I think that would be awesome in this song.
Great track though! Keep it up!
Definitely a house track! It was a chill and hypnotic track. Which, if that's what you were going for, you killed it.
Love the main riff you used. it felt almost ghost like. Which if that is what the title was meant to imply then it was dead on. It was catchy enough to be looped as many times as it was.
Only criticism I have is that while the main riff was great in its entirety, I feel a little variation once in a while would catch the listeners attention.
None the less, Great track. Keep up the good work
Thank you for the review! You are very correct in that it could use a bit of variety.. I got lazy :[
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